From 38c7284544534743b84df3f257065e85efb2bc82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hellerve <veit@veitheller.de>
Date: Wed, 14 Aug 2019 20:50:49 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] copy: rewrite

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       <h2>What I am doing right now</h2>
       <p>
         I’m currently in Berlin, Germany, thinking about tooling in static
-        languages (specifically <a href="//github.com/carp-lang/carp">Carp</a>,
+        languages (specifically <a href="//github.com/carp-lang/carp">Carp</a>),
         and prototyping ideas around that.
       </p>
       <h2>What I can do for you</h2>
@@ -147,30 +147,33 @@
       </p>
       <ul>
         <li>
-          Design, develop and architect your next product, and help your team
-          build it.
+          Help you figure out what technologies are well-suited for your
+          project, and a roadmap that makes sense for you.
+        </li>
+        <li>
+          Design and architect services, and help your team build it.
         </li>
         <li>
           Prototype a new idea, documenting the process and assumptions along
-          the way meticulously.
+          the way meticulously so you can take over without pain.
         </li>
         <li>
-          Investigate slow parts of your product and help you figure out how
-          to make it faster—or make it faster for you.
+          Mentor developers and lead by example, through honest and kind review
+          and building.
         </li>
       </ul>
       <p>
-        I have worked with a wide array of technologies and consider myself a
-        generalist. My experience ranges from Lisp and Smalltalk to Python and
-        Go, and from Postgres and Cisco switches to MongoDB and AWS. Of course,
-        this also means that I’m not an expert in any one technology—the best
-        way to know whether I’m the right person for your project is to ask me.
+        I have worked with a wide array of technologies and companies and
+        consider myself a generalist. Of course, this also means that I’m not
+        an expert in any one field—the best way to know whether I’m the right
+        person for your project is to ask me.
       </p>
       <p>
         You can also take a look at my <a href="/static/resume.pdf">résumé</a>
         or my <a href="https://github.com/hellerve">Github profile</a> if you’re
         especially curious.
       </p>
+      <h2>What I charge</h2>
       <p>
         My rates are fixed and follow a simple, yet beautiful—at least in my
         eyes—scheme:
@@ -185,6 +188,11 @@
           will be donated to a charitable organization of my choice.
         </li>
       </ul>
+      <p>
+        If you have any questions about my rates or are unsure whether your
+        product qualifies as “open source”,
+        <a href="mailto:veit@veitheller.de">contact me</a>!
+      </p>
       <h2>How you can contact me</h2>
       <p>
         I love to hear from any- and everyone who wants to share something with