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 Somewhat of a late bloomer, Veit wrote his first program at age 18.
-Weirdly drawn to C, he started out with dabblings in systems programming
-and audiovisual generative art before eventually finding his way into
-working on projects which cater to what would become his principal
-passion, the theory and practice of programming languages.
+He started out dabbling in systems programming in C and audiovisual
+generative art before eventually finding his way into working on
+projects which cater to what would become his principal passion, the
+theory and practice of programming languages.
 
 From the very start he was interested in the intersection of academia
 and industry. This lead to projects in a variety of settings in a
-seemingly short amount of time and he learned to enjoy the confrontation
-with ever new problems.
+seemingly short amount of time through which he learned to enjoy the
+confrontation with ever new problems.
 
-As it seemed like the natural next step, he currently works for a
+Having taken the natural next step, he currently works for a
 Berlin-based consultancy as a software developer and security engineer,
 auditing and working on software systems for a wide variety of capable
 and agile clients.